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Monday, February 18, 2019

Personal Connections

Paragraph Connection
 When I was in Australia I went into a building that was pitch black and you had to find your way out through the rooms. I was scared and there was only a little bit of light so me and my brother were crying. After a while though it was alright because the 3d patterns were cool. My dad got us out soon though. This is like when Tangaroa was in the dark.


Scared In The Dark- Poem


Sad, scared
Upset, crying
Lost in a pitch black maze
People talking, patterns shining,
Why can’t I just escape


2 comments:

  1. Hi Caitlyn its me Sepela I really like your personal connection story and your poem the poem was very descriptive.

    Maybe next time you could make it longer keep posting

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    1. Thank you Sepela for your feedback. Next time I will try to make it longer.

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