We have been writing six sentence stories. I hope you like my story.

Once there was a tall rusty robot named 28.

28 lived in a dirty rubbish dump on an old street in the USA.

Although 28 is rusty, he can break humongous airplanes and rocket ships until the cords that are inside split apart.

The only problem was that 28 never had anything to break.

The reason for this was because everyone was scared of 28 and nobody would give him anything to break so he just sat in the dirty rubbish every day. 

Luckily 28 met a group of robots and they helped 28 find some things to destroy.

Guess Where It Is?

A relaxing forest has grown around me and trapped me in this beautiful sight while I have slept. Trees are growing from everywhere and all shades of green appear before my eyes. I then discover I am in a cave filled with plants, trees and water. I have never even read about something like this before in a book!!

Water ran through my fingers when my hands enter a clear blue collapse of water free falling from a jumble of nature above my head. The smell of nature floats around me and it smells really cool

We have been learning to describe a place without telling where it is. Can you tell where my place is?

Guess Where It Is?

Guess Where It Is?

Clear water flows around a tropical area. I walk around with no shoes on and feel golden sand pushing up between my toes. It is soft and feels just like walking on white pillows on my bed.

Stretching out of the ground are towering palm trees looking just like grass when you are in a helicopter. The stumps are skinny and brown and they don’t even look like they are there because the sand is the same colour as the trees stumps. Different kinds are dotted around and leaves spring out of the center of this amazing plant. 

The clouds are grouped together and remind me of a pile of marshmallows on the table. As they slowly fade away from me they change from a snow white to a dark purple or grey.

From this tropical spot the water rolls across my toes as I enter the ocean. I look at the colour of the water and I see a light blue colour and it mixes into a dark blue colour as the sea gets deeper. White foam also comes close and swishes back out and repeats this heaps of times.

We have been learning to describe a place without telling where it is. Can you tell where my place is?

My Amazing Avatar

This is Chloe. She has long curly blonde hair normally with a rose pinned into one of her pigtails. Her ocean eyes stare out and above them is her pink eye shadow covered with thin black glasses. Usually she wears pink lipstick on her lips to match her pretty eye shadow. A blue and purple dress flows down her body and on her feet she wears ruby red shoes. In her right hand she carries a golden puppy because she loves puppies and dogs.

Something that would describe her is being very helpful because once her friend couldn’t figure out a math's problem and Chloe explained to her what it was. Chloe is also very athletic and ran a marathon one day but something amazing happened, she bet the world record for 11 year old girls.

Chloe also makes sure nobody is ever left out and goes to her mum’s work which is the hospital. Everyone loves Chloe because she talks to the people and takes in their lunch to them.