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Friday, September 21, 2018

We have been writing six sentence stories. I hope you like my story.

Once there was a tall rusty robot named 28.

28 lived in a dirty rubbish dump on an old street in the USA.

Although 28 is rusty, he can break humongous airplanes and rocket ships until the cords that are inside split apart.

The only problem was that 28 never had anything to break.

The reason for this was because everyone was scared of 28 and nobody would give him anything to break so he just sat in the dirty rubbish every day. 

Luckily 28 met a group of robots and they helped 28 find some things to destroy.

1 comment:

  1. Nice good descripton Caitlyn maybe next time you could make the story a bit longer but I really liked the story it was very interesting

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